"I think it was mostly that you were amazing," Alan told her.
She smiled, patting him on the knee. "Aww, that's nice. But I gotta tell you, I really didn't intend it to turn out this way. I was just going in for that blow job. But I practically *needed* that fucking. And I have never, ever had better." She frowned. "I wonder if I should hold that back, though. I have a fair number of bi and lesbian demographics that like my fingering scenes. They might not like that I was completely fucked and cum all over by a guy, instead of just the BJ."
She tilted her head. "But then again, I bet I can just expand my repertoire, do a girl on girl scene. They can just ignore the second half of this vid. Speaking of, can I see the goods?"
She reached out her hand, and Alan handed her the camera. She took it and sat cross legged, still naked on the roof, and started it from the beginning. She watched chunks of it, fast forwarding past bits.
"Wow," she said. "This is actually not too bad. You kept it pretty steady, and had it focused on me basically the whole time. You even had one or two zooms, and some nice angles. I think this might be one of my best performances, too. Although with all that cumming I was doing, it wasn't really that hard."
She tapped a lip. "Now I'll just have to decide if I want to do some subtle editing, or just leave it all as a single cut. I might need to fix the lighting just a little in places, too."
She shrugged. "Whatever. I'll do that tonight. Now, I guess I better get dressed and take a shower." She paused, sniffing herself. "But god, how is it that your cum smells so good? The taste was great, too. It's supposed to be bitter, and it still is, but... somehow I like it."
Ally frowned at him. "You're not some sort of sex god in disguise, are you?"
Alan laughed. "If it was, I would have been able to keep pounding you from behind instead of wearing out. If anyone looked like deity here, it was definitely you."
She continued to look at him, eyes narrowed.
"So, you're interested in doing a girl scene next?" he asked, trying to divert her.
She shrugged. "I'm willing to try it. As long as I'm on camera, I've found almost anything gets me hot. Why, do you know someone who would fit the bill? A true lesbian, or someone just bi-curious?"
Alan started to shake his head, but stopped. He frowned. "Actually," he said slowly, "I think I might know someone willing to expand her horizons."
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Great story. Can't wait for part 4
Solid series
Nice & straightfoward in it's own way but nice character interactions and very hot scenes. I do agree with one of the other comments about needing better proofing on this one (rode, not road for example.) To be honest, it's only distracting because the majority is fine, so the little errors stand out. (I don't mind helping with that if you want, just message me.)more...
Aviendha?
Great story - loving the series so far.
Always love a good Robert Jordan name use. :)
Big fan
Hey I'm a big fan of your work like episode 1 and two were one of my favorite literoticas of all time. I really want you to make this a long series as it taps into mind control that not many do.
I think you should play to your strengths and what makes your story unique compared to other mindless sex ones. Your earlier ones had good use of mind control like the masturbation at the cubicle and forcing thoughts into others (the bubble butt girl waiting in line when he was testing powers)
I think your stories are my favorites because there are sexual encounters that aren't straight up sex and seducing/forcing the person on the girl and just having normal sex.
I see you going towards some lesbian sex...? That in looking forward to but if I were to be as bold as to offer some suggestions on some things you could write about,
Masturbation (not direct sex, in weird places maybe? Would further the mind control concept into making them do stuff they normally wouldn't)
Short term changes to personality (getting someone to not wear panties/a bra for a short time. Not unlike the original girl to dress skimpily but also maybe mental changes like make them ok with watching porn and stuff in public or making them really down to fuck)
I guess I just am into the mind control thing and I feel as if i wanted straight up sex I have many other things I could read., But you're unique and don't have all scenes be straight up sex
Ty for writing this amazing series I hope it gets to double digitsmore...
The errors are quite distracting.
The story is hot and it flows well except when you leave grammar and spelling errors like "weren't aren't" and "Rained" for Raina. Just a little more care would make this a perfect story.
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