All That Glitters Ch. 02

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"We think the previous inhabitants of this system have been returning periodically to intern significant members of their society. The last one having taken place 360 years ago. That means they are still somewhere close by. Please note, this is a cemetery that is still being used. So, any work on these people will have to be done in a manner that doesn't disturb them. That is paramount.

"And this is why." Clark flipped up the images of the other station. "What you are looking at is my approach to what turned out to be an alien mining station." As he approached the station, it became obvious to the military personnel that it had been attacked.

The view turned to the inside of the station and the second big shock of the day, as the staff of the NS Wimple were introduced to the second example of alien life in as many minutes. "Holy Shit!" Cdr Bright blurted. More images appeared and it was obvious that serious injury had been imposed on the bodies. There was silence in the room as Clark flipped through his images.

Clark reached down and pulled something from a box on the floor, placing it on the table. A large grey metal object rested on the table. It looked something akin to a musical instrument, with tubes running in circles around it and a small bell-shaped aperture at one end. There were several buttons on the instrument, but they were not placed in any manner that would be uncomfortable for a human to hold or to work.

"I have no idea what it is, what its purpose is, or how it is powered," Clark said to forestall any questions. "There is a vessel out there almost as large as this platform, with many bodies on board that we can dissect. My belief is that this station was attacked approximately 200 years ago, some forty years after it started working in system. It was completely destroyed and left as it was after the fact. The attackers have, apparently, taken any of their own bodies with them. Nothing was left behind to indicate who the raiders were.

"I think that they were attacked by the original inhabitants of the Piscium system. But that is only a guess.

"Liramor-23 has been operating here for twenty-four years now. If they hold true to form, then we can expect the original inhabitants back within sixteen years. This is the reason we need TUSN protection," Clark finished looking directly at Capt. Whatt.

Whatt was nodding his head. If the scientists confirmed what Clark said, then they would indeed be needed. "That means they don't have FTL capability," Whatt stated.

"My thoughts exactly. FTL is not intuitive. We discovered it by accident. I think the aliens on the mining platform did as well. Humans have had no contact with them as we moved outwards. So, they likely jumped into the system. They might have better jump capability than we do as they would have to have jumped more than seventy light years into this system or we would have encountered them already.

"The original Pisciums, however, are likely within a twenty-light year radius. Not all the systems around us have been explored. The star survey from the original exploration of this system indicates a couple of possible habitable planets within twenty light years off tangent to our direction of exploration. Had we checked those out, we might have stumbled on the Pisciums before now," he concluded.

"One last shock, people," Clark said with a smile. He called up the vid of the pod.

The guests looked on as they watched the oddly shaped vessel get closer to the camera. Then they were looking inside.

"Shit!!" Dr Hitron exclaimed.

"My best guess is that it is in suspended animation. In other words, it is alive. Anything that can keep something alive for a couple of hundred years is of significance to us, if it is compatible to human physiology.

"You now understand why this system has become important. You now understand the potential threat to the system. You also have an idea of some of the potential benefits to humankind.

"Any questions?" he finished.

It took him a further two hours before they finished the brief.

End of Chapter two.

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Calnet2289Calnet2289over 1 year ago

Very enjoyable story, but as a veteran, i hope you switched the abbreviation to the proper XO vice your created Ex O in su sequent chapters. I understand the need for consistency, but it is visually annoying for me to read, and jars me out of the storyline ever time I see it.

As a budding writer myself, Capt Clark is too flawless. There is not even a hint of anything dark behind his character. I've met other veterans who've been to the "sandbox", and all of them have some darkness they've picked up from there. I hope to see some more development in future chapters.

I give it a 5 as it is defintely better than a lot of the other stories here on LE.

Wildwood55Wildwood55about 2 years ago

Not able to vote because of this messed up 'beta' UI which has been in place, and messed up for way more than a year. I gave up almost a year ago on sending reports about the problems, since I've seen no changes. Frustrating, to say the least.

Wildwood55Wildwood55about 2 years ago

"Respect?" Boy, that is asking for a lot in some parts of this site. LOL

Good space cowboy tale you've started. I found two chapters in the 3x range won awards, if you keep up the four pages as an average, it'll be something to sink my teeth into for a day or two. I appreciate it, and the quality of your work, and based on how I found it, that quality should only get better.

Aside from some incorrect word use, and a few technical grammar errors, the mechnics are sound. Natural sounding dialogue is always nice to find.

Something which threw me for a curve before I realized what you had intended was in this chapter. You wrote, "You will be receiving royalty checks at fifteen percent royalty rate vice the current five percent rate."

This is an unusual, and highly likely incorrect use of the word 'vice'. Structurally, from a wordsmith perspective, a better, (correct), choice would have been 'versus', or any other multi-word phrase which delineates two possible outcomes, actions, or options.

A more skilled editor would have caught this and the other items I referred to, above. But, with free help, you have take what you can get.

Thanks for sharing your imagination & creativity, and for all the work it takes to put together a Lit submission.

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 2 years ago

Vice as in vice versus. I’ve seen versus used alone, but this is the first time I’ve seen vice used this way. Minor detail. More importantly, we were able to check in with Sean and his personal nurse. Good to see he doesn’t seem to be in a great deal of pain. I’m enjoying this very much and having fun imagining what I could do with an eight meter flawless diamond . . . 💎 💎 💎 💎 💎 🇺🇦 🇺🇦 🇺🇦 ☮️

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Babies for Annette, Fiona, and Aurelia?

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