All That Glitters Ch. 06

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Raymond quickly stepped back with his right foot before she could bring her knee up into his groin and hit her hard with the inner part of his left arm, sending her tumbling to his right. He was out of position and unable to follow her, so he didn't, watching as she rolled into an upright position facing him.

The two grinned at each other as they sized each other up. Raymond stepped forward and swung his right foot up, around, and down in a sweeping kick that Kim ducked under. She took out his standing leg with a foot sweep and he went down.

Kim lunged forward and grabbed his foot, placing his leg in a bar with her foot on his groin. Raymond lifted his foot up bring her up off the mat. Kim realized that he was going to bring his leg back down intending to slam her into the mat. She started to push down with the foot on his groin and Raymond shook his leg hard breaking her hold on him and sending her flying to the mat.

Kim rolled back at him and grabbed his hand, placing his arm in an arm bar. She pulled hard, wanting the pain to cause him to surrender, but she had his hand in the wrong place, and he pushed his thumb into her pussy, causing her to squeak and yell in outrage. She quickly let go raising to her feet, anger in her eyes.

"You were just about to stomp on my balls," he told her with a smile, "I thought it fair to return the favour."

Kim gave a snort, conceding his point. Fighting dirty was fair in real combat but not in training. Besides, she was tingling now!

The two pushed a flurry of punches and kicks at each other when Raymond saw his chance and let a kick through his defences to impact his stomach. He was down on the mat, feigning loss of breath from the kick. He raised his left hand while clutching at his stomach with his right, sucking air into his lungs as if he had the air knocked out of him.

He saw Kim look at him strangely. She knew that the blow hadn't been that hard. Then she heard the cheering of her detachment as they yelled for her win. She looked at Raymond as he surreptitiously winked at her. She smiled and gave him a quick nod then helped him to his feet.

The men came over to congratulate Kim on her win. Raymond lifted his t-shirt off and used it to wipe away the sweat. Suddenly everything went quiet. Raymond looked up to see the men looking at him. Well at his chest.

Shit, the tat. Raymond thought. The Black Lightning Tattoo on his chest. He looked around at the men, then at Kim. She was not looking at the tattoo, she was looking at him.

"I will not have to protect you," She gave him a bow as she spoke. "My client comes first, but I think I can let you help us if problems arise."

"I will do my best to protect my friends. And I include you as a friend," Raymond returned with a smile and a bow of his own.

It was time to go back to shower, and maybe back to bed for awhile. The thought brought a grin to his face and a tingle to his crotch.

End of Chapter six.

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I'm a big fan of the rather terse style you've chosen. It gives your story a unique feel.... always good.

But the typos are horrendous for someone of your imagination and ability. There are sooo many.

Were for where

Similar examples throughout. Wish you could find someone to fix these. They are literally ruinous

Lord_JohnnyLord_Johnny8 months ago

I wont harp much on this, since others have pointed it out. That said, you need your editor, and some appreciation for hand to hand fighting that you don't currently possess.

firehorseukfirehorseukabout 1 year ago

Also

He realized immediately that it was a faint.

He realized immediately that it was a feint.

LooselyhumanLooselyhumanalmost 2 years ago

I can't be the only one that loved the thumb in the pussy. Best part of the chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story, but the spelling errors are distracting, e.g. back-quick for back-kick, chock-hold for choke-hold, steel for steal, coping a feel for copping a feel.

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