All three of us were pooped.
At four in the morning I woke up and took myself to bed. I considered waking Tracy, but she was snoring heavily. I just admired her naked form in the pre-dawn light. Then I noticed Allison looking at me. She smiled and rolled over, back to sleep, putting her arm around Tracy.
I slept alone, and satisfied.
In the days to come,Tracy, Allison and I would have to work out our feelings about what had transpired over the past 24 hours.
For now, I just couldn't stop smiling.
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Nice story
You should make a second story and follow up more on this...
Very interesting
But it was abuse of a vulnerable young woman. From what I remember girls who were so drunk that they vomited just wanted lie down and to go to sleep, no long conversations and no sex. Does need another chapter.more...
I am glad I hung in there.
I did not care too much for Allison and our hero's time together, but I knew Wifey would eventually be involved. The dynamics of Allison joining their family made the story interesting - even without the sex. I agree that we need at least one more chapter.more...
Poor reject abused girl is also addicted to alcohol and drugs
This happens too often in our society , a girl no one wants is turned into a street addict only to die at a young age or age in one of those homeless ,helpless people.
Wow! I'm not sure what I think about this story. Wasn't badly written. Flowed nicely. Dialogue was well written enough to sound "real-life." Sounds a bit improbable, but that has nothing to do with nothing. My kinks don't run to vomit and scat, but I am a reader, not a moralist. Not that vomit and scat have anything to do with morality.
Good enough read that while I can't give it 5 stars, I can check to see if this dude has written anything else.more...
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