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"Wait, this is from Isabella. who is Natalie?" I wondered.
I ran over to where her tent was pitched and it along with her brother's and friends' tents were gone. I looked over at the parking lot and sure enough the car they came in with was missing. I was distraught because I thought I had more time and I didn't even get a way to contact her, no address, no phone number, email, twitter nothing and now I wasn't even sure of her name.
- COMMENTS
OpenWordsabout 2 years agoFirst, any girl that's cool with one night stand isn't worth investing in a relationship. Screw her, sure... But don't try to make a housewife of sub par material...
Second, way to much Mary Jane Syndrome going on with the protagonist.
eragon43about 3 years agoAmazing story! I haven't read anything like this as far as I know and thats saying something.
PhysicallyImpossibleabout 6 years agoThe story itself is alright but the comment by HectorBidon is pure gold.
4AS2PD0over 6 years agoto what could be another incredible Lit. saga. if you got a good editor then no worries on the occaisional thing that slips through. ( edit, im leaving the typo,lol) i know of at least one writer from here that has managed to go independent with a good size fan base he built up over many chapters. All it takes is the mind to generate the ideas and the time to put it to pap...er keyboard. This is an awesome start though and cant wait for what else you do with it.
