Altered Reality

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AunayAunayover 13 years ago
Very HOT!

My god that made me so moist! I'm going to have to get my vibe out now...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Altered Reality

Welcome back Master "V" as ever you make a story well worth reading. You know how I feel about people who quibble about typo's and such,so we won't go there. The story was short, sweet , hot and worth the read. I loved the suprise ending or was it the beginning of a really good night;-) That should make another story somewhere down the line.

maggie

LadyCibelleLadyCibelleover 18 years ago
Just like always :)

Wow MV,

You never cease to amaze me. Each story you write is better than the one before!! Just a shame that all those typos derail the reader from really enjoying it.

I know a good editor *hint, hint* if you ever need one :)

Keep writing..you're one of the BEST!!!!

H20waderH20waderover 18 years ago
the dedication was nice

wish you had started with I instead of chad.

i do not much care for dream sences, but this was fair. I was looking for a story by you because i heard that you were really good. i will try another one of your stories to see if you are.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Altered Reality

a delightful read...and simply wonderful to give something so special to the woman you love in dedication, its nice to know some men still love that way. As always i love to read your writings and hope to see more as often as possible..keep up the good work, Sir. respectfully a fan in Texas

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