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"Fuck! Dad look at me! It's Annie. You don't have to keep doing this. Please! PLEASE!"
"Please Dad!"
"Please."
"Daddy?"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 8 years agoDark and poorly written. 9 pages and then dead. I would say it was a buzz kill but this sucked at page 1. *
Anonymousover 9 years agoFantastic story with a heartbreaking ending. As a romantic I wanted the happy ending with a baby and happily ever after.
C2J2over 11 years agoStopped reading when she bought him Viagra.... You skipped to the end right there and the story should be longer...
Khirsa78over 11 years agoGreat job with the story. Very long and detailed which I feel actually creates a bond between the reader and characters. The ending was actually a great set up, you at this point can either kill Calvin or some how get him medical attention. The ending is vague enough still to pull off a great part 2. Though I will admit after reading it I am saddened like most others, Annie and her father having a tragic past, we look to having happy ending for the 2 characters who have nothing more than each other...
