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"We will be leaving in about an hour, I suppose," he replied, and brushed a kiss on my forehead.
"What?" I said, and lifted my head to look at his face. "You haven't seen Charlie in months. I don't want to intrude on your family time."
"Well, since you're my girlfriend now, Iwantyou to intrude," he said with a smile. "Besides, you haven't seen the kids in ages. Last time I went little Katie was asking about you."
"She's only five. I bet she doesn't even remember me," I replied.
"Well, I know Jilly would love to have some girl talk with you."
"Fine, I'll go," I said, making it sound like I didn't want to even though I was really excited. "But I have to go home and shower first."
"Okay. Jack is still here so if you hurry you might be able to con a lift home with him and then I will pick you up in about an hour. We'll stop and get some breakfast on the way."
"Good plan." I smiled and kissed him quickly before getting out of bed.
"Oh my god!" Spencer moaned. I turned and looked at him over my shoulder in confusion. "God, you have amazing legs, Edie," he said when he saw my raised eyebrow.
"Is that so?" I asked playfully, and crawled back on the bed and straddled his body.
"Yes it is" he smiled, and ran his hands up my thighs. "Great ass too" he continued, and reached around to cup my ass.
"Well, enjoy your grope because it's the last you'll get for today," I teased, before kissing him quickly and jumping off the bed to get dressed.
"You really are evil," he laughed as I pulled my jeans on.
"Yep," I said, pulling on a jumper. "I'll see you later." I picked up my bag and kissed him on the cheek before running out to catch Jack, who was just about to leave.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 12 years agonice story, but I have to say, you're not a good writer (since you're still quite young, I'd say you'll probably improve in zime, so keep practising.)
There are some inconsistencies (for example, one doesn't need to study to be an accountant and what does it mean, that Beth studied science - there are dozens, hundreds of different sciences, you don't study it in general).
And i think her reactions as a rape victim are a bit cliché, surely her behaviour would be more subtle.
But with a bit effort, you'll do fine!
Jezzahbehlover 12 years agoIgnore your horrible commenters. If they cannot be man enough to reveal who they are and cower behind the cover of anonymous then they are not worth it. Love forever and always, jezz
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoWhat!? Did a 14 year old write this? I mean what he is saying. He is spelling out he loves the women and she is sitting there clueless. I love how there grabbing the ass is fine but hand on the thigh was pushing it. Really now? Don't get me wrong I like the idea your getting at but poorly put together. I mean read your script and they sound like they came out of high school. Not to mention I hate the name Little One. It what I call my 3 year old niece.
2275jrover 13 years agoanother hot part of this very romantic story.
im loving this story. and will go on reading it as long as there's more add to it. reading this is awesome.
Anonymousover 13 years agoGod, i love Aussie lingo makes me feel right at home, keep it up wanna read more of this.
Thanks
Marco
