"My brother had a very serious truck wreck, but you wouldn't know. You had your legs spread for some low life, ignoring him, your daughter and what passes for your son. BTW, been nice knowing you."
I guess there's a silver lining to every dark cloud. When my headache went away, so did my dreams...no more prophetic shit for me.
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So Bad...
...so very, very bad.
The "writing" is junior high school level at best - trailer-park stream-of-consciousness drivel.
So much potential
The story line stared well. But along the way became lost and disjointed. From there, it went downhill.
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