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"Well, the circumstances are tragic and there will be responsibilities, but I suspect that you will become the new leader of Dekeris at some point in the future. Nevertheless, you'll have to fight hard for the honor. The Akrosians, their puppet peers, and the surviving Magnates will all have a stake in opposing you. Don't become complacent at any point in the struggle. Remember, people will look to you for leadership, so you must take the initiative and be an example of your ideal Dekerin warrior," Kalitz pointed out.
"Thanks for the advice. I will heed it, sir," Eupas agreed.
"You're welcome, Eupas. Now, let's get to work," the Ambassador told him.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 16 years agowoven together to finish (at least the four parts I saw) on an upbeat note but with much adventure for Positive change yet to come. Great story. I encourage you to consider a second volume.
A similarly brief tale (3 or 4 parts) could tell of the growth of the resistance, expulsion of the invaders, establishment of a society-appropriate government as proposed in part 4, and a boquet finish with the Ambassador's Aide (or relative, should he become a martyr) becoming first elected prime minister, and the Ambassador asked to serve as either Secretary of Foreign affairs, or Ambassador at large, starting with Earth, perhaps.
So if you fel the energy or your muse pulling at you to dive again into the Sci-Fi/adventure end of things, please, please, consider pursuing a second phase conclusion to this one. It does end successfully as is with the monologue by the articulate and far-seeing aide, no criticism there. But it is still fertile ground for a sequel chronicalling the realization of what the aide sees as the path to the future.
Needent be overly sensual, unless it works out that way. Some (much) of the Sci-Fi on here is as much straight up sci-fi as it is sensuality on some distant world in a galaxy far far away, a long long time ago, etc. I congratulate you on a believable, and wonderfully readable, tale.
Best regards,
SirRichard_M
