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While Amelia was showing her memories, Andrew and Charles moved behind the respective woman to be ready to catch them if necessary. They watched as Amelia released her link was Susan both of the women staggered for second.
"I know whose voice that was. It is..." Both women said in unison.
To be continued!
- COMMENTS
cittranalmost 11 years agoAfter the first few chapters, I really hate to say this, but I feel I need to:
This chapter needs an editor to rework it. A lot.
The story was good, but when I need to read an otherwise simple sentence more than once simply because of multiple spelling, grammatical, or syntax errors, something is wrong.
MizTover 11 years agoLearning to type on tablet and keep screwing up. Will leave longer comment when I get to a real keyboard.......but this chapter is great!!!!!!
katgoddess1over 11 years agoI really enjoy the story line, even though I hate the grammar/spelling/formatting errors. I also despise cliff-hangers! I believe they are over-used! I think it would have been just as dramatic if the name had been revealed.
It looks like Andrew is right to be suspicious of Charles. I wonder what Susan would think if she knew that Charles plans to eventually dispose of Andrew and Amelia?
Iread2relaxover 11 years agoWell i for one loved this chapter. It was a long read and I had to go back but that's OK. It is still awesome. Thank you Don for writing this tale. voted 5 stars.
