- First Time
- Amen Corner
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"Are you ready to sign the letter of intent for my team?" he whispered with a smile in his voice.
"Well, I don't know yet. I've got three more days to decide don't I?" I responded as I tugged playfully on his half erect cock.
So, that's my first time story, sports fans. In true epilogue fashion I must disclose that I did not attend ASU. I wanted to continue to see Tony in the future and I didn't think it would feel right sneaking around with him behind the backs of my teammates. We had a great relationship over the next few years but I never went back to the Masters. However, whenever I watch the tournament on television and they show Amen Corner, I say my own little prayer of thanks.
- COMMENTS
Starcrestalmost 5 years agoI really don't know where to begin. You're amusing, funny, witty, and erotic. Your references to all sorts of things make this the most interesting of stories. The way they are told I can literally imagine them happening. I was very impressed to have Daniel Q Steele comment on your stories as I admire his work tremendously. Some of your asides have left me rolling on the floor laughing. Thanks again. I would only wish that I had a hundredth of your talent for composition.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoEnjoyed reading the story and it was CUTE. Maybe it was a little too cute. The spelling of the authors pen name to start with is cute. The main chatacter was portrayed as being very cute which was a big turn on along with the conjugal act and ALL of the analogies were cute but, they became a little tiring after a while by virtue of the number of them. Many people speak with cute analogies but not everyone uses a cute analogy in every statement that they make. Other than that it was a good cute enjoyable story.
Jonnyfliesover 11 years agoThis is the first of your stories that I have read, but it will not be the last, I assure you.
I love your sense of humour. It has a naughty impish feel to it that makes me think you would be a really interesting person to know. I seriously doubt your friends have a boring life when you are around.
The weaving of that humour with this, very erotic tale, makes me really want to believe that you are sharing your own, real life experience here.
Real or not, it certainly felt real.
To be a really good story teller you have to 'involve' your readers in your story. They have to actually care about the characters and their lives.
To say I felt involved is an understatement. I was willing you on from your first meeting with the coach and I wanted to punch that 'sweet feminine' lady who met you at the airport, for you.
To sum up: A really sweet, erotic, funny and touching story. Well done. Every public comment seems to echo my own feelings about this one.
I think you got it right here. Congratulations.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoFunny, creative and fresh! Love the pop culture references! Can't remember when i enjoyed a story more.
