Even before I spotted her myself, I sensed her arrival, as virtually every man in the waiting crowd, perked up as they saw her and probably drew their tummies in.
Mai-Lin was as beautiful as the day when I first saw her, probably more, and her smile seemed to light up the entire terminal when she spotted me waiting for her.
Leaning over to her two travelling companions, she pointed me out to them, and they both rushed over towards me.
"Daddy --- Daddy --- I've missed you so much," cried out Maddy, our five-year-old daughter, as she leapt into my arms. She was a miniature version of her mother and had already left several broken hearted young boys behind when she had left to come and live in the UK.
"Hi Dad," greeted my eight year old son a little less spontaneously, but the smile on his face said it all. He was already tall for his age, and I couldn't wait to see how he made the change from the American style of football, to the European version, soccer.
Maybe one day he'd play for the Arsenal!
"First day of the rest of our life," greeted my lovely wife as she reached up to kiss me.
Indeed --- how true!
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Hope you liked it.
Tried to take on board some of the constructive criticism from some of you after my last story, but only you can judge if I have succeeded. Please let me know what you think.
By the way;
Why did I choose Huntingdon County?
Well some twenty years or so ago, I, with a group of English Folk dancers (Morris dancers) spent two months touring the East coast of America giving displays at carnivals etc.
We were looked after so incredibly well by everyone there, that I have had fond thoughts of America and Americans ever since.
The biggest event we did, was a week end in Huntingdon County, where they were celebrating their bi-centenery, and I remember I stayed with the local doctor.
What a great week-end.
If anyone remembers us then I was the guy dressed up in the Lion's suit, and my photo appeared on the front page of one of the local newspapers. Unfortunately lost my copy in a house fire several years ago.
Fond memories, and I met my wife the week end I got back.
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Good story. Easy read. Plot ok too. Would like former wife to have been at airport doing some task and seeing her ex and his beautiful wife and children . She then really felt the pain of her loss due to her selfish stupidity.more...
Re-Reading
I couldn't get over how Jodie was so self-centered that she actually didn't see the irony of the guy that she cheated Dave out of his holiday with, was now cheating her out of hers!
While she MAYBE hadn't already been sleeping with Terry (doubtful!), she obviously had SOME sort of a relationship with him, and she was just looking for ANY excuse to take him along, hence her "Oh shit," when it's revealed that he "just happened" to have his luggage and passport with him!more...
KarenE has a great point.
In real life, you let your woman act like that over and over and over and do nothing, she is not going to have any respect for you.
The wife's actions, while a bit over the top, are not completely farfetched given the situation they are in with him basically being pussywhiped.
As Karen implied, a good paddling the first time she acted like a spoiled entitled child could have stopped her behaviour back then.
That being said, this was a good story about a wimp finally having enough with a spoiled selfish cheating cunt.
And there wasn't anything wrong with the ending.more...
Gotta Agree With Sinsational83...
The bulk of the story was a good one, but, the ending was extremely lacking, it could have been so much better... I also couldn't give you more than 4 stars on this one and for the same reasons that were stated in Sinsational83's diatribe...
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A Stupid Wife!
- That teacher wife was some piece of work! And hubby was a wimpy asshole letting her get away with her flirting,dancing,(and fucking?) at company functions,as well as showing off her tits in stores.All for some stupid,rationalized payback for something trivial?!
- As soon as he saw her taking that art teacher with her on his vacation to Spain,he should have had a divorce lawyer working on the papers!
- She played her husband for a fool and got what she deserved but,a happy-go-lucky wack-job like her will end up on her feet,and most likely her back,with some equally wacky asshole!more...
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