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"Christine, it's me, Jeff."
I was panting hard and I took several steps towards him.
"No I'm Jeff, I'm your husband."
I turned the other way and saw the second blonde man at the other end. My head was turning between the two. I hoped I would remember my husband but I didn't. They both looked at me; I shook my head and backed into the toilet. I locked myself in and sat trembling on the loo. I started hugging myself. I heard scuffles and swearing just outside the door. A few moments later something fell to the floor, just outside the toilet. There was eerie silence for a few seconds. Then I jumped and shrieked as the door was kicked in. I sat cowering as I saw the head of one of the men on the floor outside, he was unconscious. I looked up into the eyes of the other man who had blood coming from his nose. He was panting hard as he held out his hand. I gulped at the hand that was offered to me.
"Are, you, are you my husband?" I asked nervously.
The End.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous5 months agoAll mysteries must have an ending, logical or otherwise. Your story doesn't have one. That makes it an unfinished story. And I hate unfinished stories. So I'm unable to give you any more than 3, essentially for the mystery.
WailAndGnashalmost 2 years agoIt was all well written and everything, but waaay too much sex, and too little plot! After ploughing doggedly through 9½ episodes, I at least expected her to end up with her real hubby! Then there's something about a company, an experiment, 4 years, regenerating, etc, all just tacked on, to make an ending that isn't.
Sorry! I feel a bit short-changed, not that it cost me a penny, lol. Good writing tho, as I said.
Anonymousover 2 years agoso which one id the real ending prev chapter or this one or you just made the last one end at cliffhanger as readers thrashed you for the 9 th chapter
Anonymousabout 3 years agoThis was one of the best stories I have read but the thing about mysteries is that it if there is no resolution of did she get home at the end then the reader feels as though their time was wasted. Would have rated higher but can't due to the lack of a substantial ending.
JBEdwardsover 5 years agoWhat an ending! Wow! You really are relentless! Binge reading your ten chapters was a joy. --JB
