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Click hereAfter Mosttomvone had left Dahlia asked Torroto, "What is the deal about Mosttomvone's injuries?"
Torroto sighs, "He was caught by a Harvest Corp. Scientist, who performed evil experiments on him," a sad frown crosses Torroto's voice, "He won't talk about it much because he lost his companion during the escape. But at least he doesn't go as far with his human test subjects as they did with him. Now, Dahlia let me introduce Xeno Rade."
A trumpeting noise rang through the room, "That's me!" crowed the computer, "Now let's see how compatible we are."
Dahlia walked over and placed her gauntlet in the cradle. Data Gauntlets directly connect the human nervous system to a computer's input system allowing for speed-of-thought communication, however; how clear the information and commands are transmitted is the function of the gauntlet's quality, Dahlia's was of the best available but when this computer connected with her gauntlet it was like she had plugged her brain into the computer without any of the barriers she usually encountered.
The entire Planetary Net was open to her thoughts…
The Harvest Corporation was TOAST!
- COMMENTS
StormmasterXover 12 years agoI really like the creative flow of your story, But it lacks description. For me, the best stories are the ones that you can see. Description places you there, like watching a movie in your head. Your spelling is atrocious by the way, not all of it just some of them. Good story keep it up.
Anonymousover 14 years agoGoing nicely. The only hint/criticism I can think of (besides the obvious) is to avoid "information overload" - try not to introduce too many new characters and ideas at once, as this might confuse the reader. Keep up the good work!
