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Click hereI exploded as I felt my glans pulse at the back of her throat, my soldier surging to go deeper into his moist temptress. Ainsley placed her hands on my hips and gripped me tightly while I unloaded all of my fear and stress and panic from the previous day down her throat. I closed my eyes as the rhythm of my contractions slowed, and I felt a hand slide up my chest and come to rest gently on the side of my face, a thumb moving slowly to caress my lips and cheek. I felt the moisture of my tears stream down only to be swept and smoothed by her thumb. I felt safe and cared for ... and loved? I melted into my couch with the warmth of Ainsley still caressing me.
That talk went pretty well, I smiled inwardly. I fell asleep as a final thought crawled by my remaining consciousness: Was that my fifth blowjob? I think I like them.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoI love stories like this, on artificial creation of life and on exploring a new world (as Ainsley does). You wrote this beautifully.
Anonymousover 5 years agoPlease keep going as this is a good story with great potential!
kyriss12over 5 years agoGood story overall but a few minor issues. First David seems way too accepting of Ainsley, and not quite concerned enough about Vanessa. If I was in his shoes I would be a lot more freaked out, probably call Ainsley a monster definitely be demanding my friend back ASAP.
The other problem is the way Vanessa pretty much handed her entire life over to Ainsley for the foreseeable future, and now there seems to be some implication that bringing her back would involve a massive ordeal when transferring over in the first place seemed relatively easy. Is Ainsley a lot more manipulative and ruthless than she lets on, was Vanessa secretly battling depression and effectively just comit suicide. Both of these issue are going to have to be addressed at some point.
Look forward to the next entry. I hope Vanessa comes back, and if Ainsley isn’t a villain please don’t take to long finding a way to keep her around that doesn’t envolve taking over someone else.
Anonymousover 5 years agoI do not comment often. But I must say they I enjoyed this story. It intrigues me on many levels. I won’t say how much I am already speculating about the directions it could take. You clearly have a mind for detail and quality. Please keep writing. I might even go so far as to risk distracting you with encouragement to consider writing professionally. That’s a sentence.
writerannabelleover 5 years agoNow the hard part - keep going! I can really feel some passion behind your writing, you've put some thought into this.
