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"That..., was..., awesome!" Kayla turned in her seat still completely naked. She had one leg up that her arm rested on which would have given me a nice view of the girl I had just pounded had the lights been on. As it was, I really hadn't seen anything of her; just felt it really good.
I chuckled shaking my head in disbelief. "Well, I guess I made your fantasy come true." She whistled loudly, letting her head rest on the window. "Though I'll never understand why it was me you wanted so damn bad."
"Honey..., you're too damn cute for your own good...," she spoke at the ceiling, her eyes closed. "Speaking of good; is that what you did to make Brianna squeal last night and this morning? She nearly shattered windows. Where'd you learn to screw like that?"
I chuckled at her, explaining that my mouth had caused those sounds more than anything. "Oh damn! You still have to eat my girl then, please?!" Kayla begged while she touched herself trying to look sexy again but yelped at the extreme sensitivity. "Just maybe later though," she giggled.
"Oh my God!" I exclaimed, shaking my head and dying laughing. "You're insatiable."
Kayla was dressing in a hurry as I pulled off the exit toward the hotel we had agreed to meet at. The remainder of the trip she had fallen asleep still naked against the window, all of her womanhood spread open for me to see. I kept looking over at her, admiring more of her body as my eyes adjusted to the darkness.
She really was an astoundingly pretty girl and I couldn't for the life of me understand why she had desired me so much. Still, aside of the strong guilt that was coming over my conscious for Brianna, knowing that she didn't really give me the green-light to do what I had done, it had been the most amazing experience I had ever known in my life and I secretly hoped that one day I could relive it with Brianna as well.
Pulling up to the hotel, going a bit slower so Kayla could finish pulling her tank top back on, I picked up my phone and texted Tim. There was no answer so I texted Sabrina, again with no answer, and finally Gemma. Moments later I received a response, a picture message. Gemma's spread bald Venusian lips splayed in close-up on my screen with the words "Room 217..., dinner's waiting for you."
END OF CHAPTER 2
- COMMENTS
TEXASMADDOGabout 1 year agoOh, "you people"...making comments about 'cheating' and Ronnie's unfaithfulness, AFTER READING THE ENTIRE CHAPTER, seeing what you knew (or should have known) was going to happen!!
OF this is too repulsive for you, STOP READING THE STORY, and move on to another less objectionable one.
I, for one, wish I had a family like this; cousins I was close to, maybe an aunt or two thrown in for good measure. The first two chapters are marvelous, I enjoyed how the story is written, and the "lost-love-found' aspect for Brianna and Ronnie. Brianna (reluctantly) gave Ronnie the okay to fool around with his cousin(s)...she is gonna be an excellent wife, friend, and lifetime companion for Ronnie; and Ronnie will be the same. The trust they have in ea h other is the basis for relationships, not drama and suspicion and jealousy. These two 💘 LOVE each other, and are going to strengthen that more and more!!
Five**5**Stars...YYYAAAYYY!!!
pvcleavealmost 11 years agoI did not like this chapter at all. How much could he love her if he can't tell a woman no. Just wait until they are together a few years. I feel sorry for Brianna.
eroticagamemakerabout 11 years agoAuthorI really appreciate everyone who has left public comments and private feedback on both chapters thus far. In particular, the fact that the two public comments here were on both sides of the 'cheating' question demonstrate that I did in fact build the unknown anticipation toward that very question into chapter 2. Is Ronnie actually cheating on Brianna or did she really give him permission? That's the big question and you can look forward to the 'consequences' of that to be coming in Chapter 3 and onward. I'm really excited to see where Ronnie and his cousins are heading and I'm sure you all will enjoy reading about it just as much as I am enjoying writing it. Chapter 3 is in the final stages of writing now so that, together with the 5-day waiting period that Literotica seems to have now, I anticipate it being available for you all in about a week from now.
Again, thanks for the comments and I'm so happy to see the fan base starting to develop and getting excited about my story; it makes writing all the more enjoyable for me. Keep reading and keep commenting!
Anonymousabout 11 years agoWhat the title says.
