Alexander couldn't help but smile. "Ah, don't mock me. It is glorious my General. I command a whole army of warriors in the kitchen." He enjoyed the amusement twinkle in Bennonton's lovely eyes. "It's not as glamorous as the consort of the Lord General, I agree, but things are different here. Just...give it a little time. Okay?"
His king pursed his lips and gave him a narrow-eyed little glare. "I will not be a pot scrubber, cook-Zan'Dar."
"Oh, is that so? Well, we will find something more suitable to your station, beloved."
"I will be consort to the lord of the kitchen," Bennonton decided and took another bite of the food, watching him. "You will have to keep me in high style though."
"Mmmm," Alexander agreed and leaned closer to kiss his forehead. "Fine silks for you, my lord."
They were able to rest until nightfall wrapped together without anyone intruding on them until the cry of mounts went up from outside.
Bennonton tried to leap to his feet, grunting with pain as he grabbed at his wounded side with a choked oath. "Chirmeng! Mortari!" His smile brightened with delight that overrode the pain. "Oh thank all the gods!"
Rider. Rider, I come for you. The familiar song cried through him as Mortari embraced him, enfolding him in the silken warmth and protection and....pain. Oh, my Zan'Dar. Your beautiful soul. Look at you! The kindness and affection spilled over him, soothing the old scars and the torn bits inside his soul. I was not fast enough. He sounded wretched in his grief over the condition he found his rider.
"We better get out there." Alexander said as he helped Bennonton up and pulled the robe around him. His hands fumbled at the tie, struck anew by how huge the man was. Oh, how he had missed the towering presence of the man himself and it was almost overwhelming to know he could touch him again.
"Alexander! I think you have most guests. Where are all these coming from?" Vanessa called, pounding at the door of the room. "We're calling auntie Marion."
She was still waiting at the door when they opened it and gawked up at Bennonton and then at Alexander in accusation.
Bennonton started and bowed formally, "Lady! Oh! Dear gods. You are a reflection of the High Lady. It is a pleasure and an honor."
Vanessa stared a moment seemingly baffled at how to respond but Alexander was already pulling the big man with him down the hall.
Bennonton beamed at him, "You should have introduced us. I have much to tell her about her sister."
"She doesn't know. I haven't told anyone. I...it's not something easily explained. I honestly didn't know for sure what happened." He shook his head slightly. "We can talk about it later."
Oh, they were going to have so much to explain. Bennonton stared around himself
It turned out that talking about it would be put off for awhile. The pair of mounts were wounded as badly as the others had been but luckily nothing was broken beyond repair. As dawn came, two weary men huddled in a stall with the mounts around them. Alexander was considering if he could carry his beloved back to the room when he looked up to find his mother smiling over the edge of the stall at them.
"Cozy?" Her voice startled Chirmeng into wakefulness. His snorted warning was soothed by the others. All the war-mounts had happily included the newcomers into their band and tried to reassure the nervous sapphire stallions that they were safe. Really safe.
"Are they settling in alright?" She pitched her voice lower. Her smile was warm, eyes shining with emotion as though she couldn't quite contain her happiness.
"I think so, but they are still a bit shaken."
"I imagine so. Your auntie Marion is too. So, should we expect any more guests?"
He felt heat rise in his cheeks but she was smiling so broadly at him he had to chuckle. "No, mother. I don't think so."
She nodded. "Well, you two look comfortable. Do you want me to bring blankets out here?"
"I was thinking how I could carry him home." Alexander admitted, smoothing a hand over the man's bald scalp.
"I can help with that too. I'm so happy for you, son. Surprised my dear but so happy. I have not seen you smile like this since you were a boy."
Alexander did smile and he ducked his head slightly. "A part of myself was missing all this time." He rubbed his free hand over his chest where it felt almost hot inside him.
"I can understand. There has been too much of that in our lives I think. It's about time our fates changed. Come, let's bring your warlord inside."
He thought about his mother's words as they helped Bennonton inside between them. Were their fates changing? Could they be on the brink?
Amy's words whispered back to him, 'There is a beginning that can only start with a catalyst.'
That night as he curled himself around his beloved and pressed his ear to the vast chest to hear his heartbeat, he sent out his thanks to Amy. He wasn't quite sure how she'd done it, but without a doubt, he knew that she was involved in bringing this man and their mounts through.
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I'm going to end this here as I have stretched out this story quite a bit. If people would like to read more about these two, let me know. My goodness, what will Bennonton think of this new world? ^_^
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more threads in the tapestry
I loved this story and how it brushed against some of your others that are no longer here on lit. There were parts that felt like saying hello to old friends. I also thoroughly enjoyed meeting these newer characters, even if you did bring me to tears with them more than once. I can't help but wish for all of these stories to be incorporated into one big book (or a collection :) ) Please continue to weave these characters into the whole story, which I devour bit by bit as you present it. more...
Aw...!
Hard to respond but I loved the feedback. I want to say that I totally get that this story is a sequel and puzzle piece to a larger work/world. I appreciate seeing where I need to drop more hints in this one. I didn't want to get lost in telling a bunch of stuff but I see I need a little more info I thought I could skim the surface.
I would share the other stories but they are not gay male. :)
I have not had good results posting edits though.more...
Umm...
I'm going to have to disagree with the other comments. I do like the story, and I think it has all the potential to be one of the best stories on the this site, but it needs work. Quite a bit of it actually. I would go as far as suggest that instead of writing a sequel immediately, you should rework this story first, and then continue on.
Some of the things are more technical and are fairly simple to fix, i.e. misspelling and verb agreements. However, others have to do with the story itself. You need to do a lot more world-building for it to be truly extraordinary.
Where's the background on the Wallaces and Harrises? Alexander is a spirit-kin, which implies that he's more than human. Is he? Does it mean they all are? And if so, what are they? How did they end up in human world? Did they come from the world of the war mounts? If so, how and why? Same goes for other characters. Who's Amy Welton? She calls Alexander her "heart-son," but where was she in the beginning of the story when he felt so unwanted and forgotten?
I could go on for a while, but I hope you get what I mean. Honestly, right now it almost feels like you have all of those details in your mind (which you probably do, since you created the story), and you present them as if they are self evident, but they are not. I found that I had to re-read some of the parts thinking that I missed something, and it still didn't make much sense.
Please, please don't think of this as bashing comment. I do truly think that your story has a tremendous potential, and I do hope that eventually there'll be a sequel. I hope you take this as a constructive critique given in hopes that it helps. Thank you.more...
Absolutely amazing
Loved this story! Found it hard to stop reading!
Please, please give us some more!
This is a wonderful story.
Please continue. I look forward to every post you make. Thanks.
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