An Unlikely Romance Ch. 06

byLaRascasse©

"It's too late."

I stormed out of the apartment slamming the door shut. I felt sick to my stomach at what I had just seen.

"And here you were thinking you could change, son. You get an A for effort though."

"JUST SHUT UP!!!"

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by TheOldWidow02/10/17

fast paced and designed to suck the reader in

I read all of them at once, better than reading a chapter at a time to get the feel of the black horror, creeping like mold to cover and stain. Well done.

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by Anonymous05/15/16

i never liked monica

in writing her, you made her too tough, her epiphany that she liked simon wasn't enough to soften her, then she goes and does this - she's weaker than simon, who throough his guilt and love for monicamore...

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