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Click hereShe spoke quietly to the halls in a language that had died out before the gate of Eden had been finally closed, “What do people see in God, anyway?”
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Anonymousabout 12 years agoTwo angels had the power to knock out the "prince of darkness"? The being who waged war against God is that weak? Dunno sounded a bit off to me and subsequently ruined the whole story for me.
Anonymousover 17 years agoThat is one of the best mixes of erotica and fantasy I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Well visualized and organized..tantalizing and appealing
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI couldn't help laughing at times. You have a great way with words.
nekaperover 19 years agoNice work ZephR, loved the story. It's great to see that your passion really lies in good story telling (and I mean good) rather than getting too carried away with meaningless erotica. To me, such engaging subject matter and somewhat controversial themes deserve to be explored with this kind of interest by people with a good mind for the ironic, much like yourself.
