After years of desiring my mother, I still cannot believe how far we have gone in the last four months. I only hope now that soon, I will finally be able to make love to her.
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You can see more of my stories on StoriesOnline.net. I can't post some of them here, as they violate Literotica's guidelines.
Wow x2
I posted on your original story about what a wonderful writer you were, and I still subscribe to that. To the very first poster "Anonymous" (who made the disparaging remarks), I would suggest you stick with comic books...they are probably more your forte.
You are truly a talented writer, and I personally hope to read more of your stories.more...
My Mistake
Ok, I'll admit I did not make that entirely clear. I just submitted an edited version that states that before the story.
how is the reader supposed to know this is a continuation?
there is nothing designating this as chapter 02,
there are no comments at the beginning suggesting that the reader should read some other story first,
nor is there a box to the side of the comments with "also in this series" and the name of the other story.
It wasn't till after reading the story and looking through the comments that I found a reference to a previous story.
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Can not wait till the next part.
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