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"This attire is much more fitting for a bog-witch," Elise mused. "Although..."
She gave her wand a twirl, and from off in the tall grass flew Moira's wand. It answered her summons, zipping to Elise and bobbing in the air expectantly. With her free hand, Elise stroked her chin in mock contemplation, before giving her wand another twirl. And at that, Moira's knobby wand sailed away, coursing towards the dazed and defenseless girl.
Moira shook the fog from her mind and had begun to press herself off the ground when her wand penetrated her exposed ass. She let out an indignant yelp and jumped to her feet, snatching the wand from her violated posterior.
"My! How strangely do bog witches ride their brooms!" taunted Elise, the class roaring with laughter and Moira's whole body prickled and stung in disgrace.
"That is quite enough," the Beldame shot icily at the blonde, and Elise bowed submissively.
But it was too much for Moira, and she took off running from the field with tears of utter shame mingled with hatred leaking from the corners of her eyes. Elise watched her once aspiring rival retreat with her hands feebly trying to cover her tiny tits and privates as she ran, her taut behind trembling in full view of the class.
Elise smirked. No, she would not suffer rivals, and if they sought to usurp her, they best prove more talented than she.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 4 years agoGood story about the rich, pretty, and talented abusing the poor, talented, yet naive.
scienceistastyover 4 years agoThis story was excellent and I cannot wait to see what you write next!
Anonymousover 4 years agoPlease write more.
Too often in stories like this Moira would have found a way to turn the tables in the end to defeated the much cockier older girl. Either that or the new girl would be way way to incompetent and lost to easily. Basically there usually isn’t enough attention to balance in stories like this because It’s clear right from the stoart who will win. You do a great job keeping the rivalry interesting.
I like that you didn’t make Moira helpless and a incompetent witch. She was clearly pretty kick ass herself. The reader kinda wanted to root for her, which makes it much more sweet to see her utterly destroyed.
I hope in part 2 it’s not just a by the numbers Moira defeats Elise. Although you did such a good job with this I have confidence whatever part 2 is will be fantastic.
TrueMortover 4 years agoI enjoyed this. Well written, original and a good foundation for more chapters.
Looking forward to more, and hopefully a little payback :)
