She smiled in his eyes as he collapsed beside her, her arm moving round his neck, her face wreathed in the post-orgasmic smile he so loved.
- I'm so glad you did that to me. Feeling better now my darling? she murmured, and kissed his mouth.
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Gripping Read. Brilliant.
Midway through, there's an unsettled and uncomfortable feeling which lurks in my gut upon reading this. However, it is very stimulating and there is a nervous and exciting thrill I get, as a reader which carries me through to the end. :) There is a fuzzy warmth which endears the situation to me, too.
Erotica that provokes thoughts (other than plain filthy ones) and emotions is a rare find. My interest is keenly perked. I'll keep an eye on your account for more stories. :) Well Wishes, from Lady K.more...
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