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Click hereBut, since I like giving you, the readers, what you want to read about, I'll put it to a vote. Please give me your thoughts in the comments on what direction Apocalypse Slaves should take from here:
A - I want more of Caine, dammit!
B - I really like seeing Vault Survivors get abducted, go back to that.
C - I like seeing the everyday life like in parts 1-4 and in 13 here. Stay with this.
D - I want to see something else/other. Here's my suggestion:
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I love the series so far. I feel you need to fill out the world some with what every day life is like so will answer that as my choice, but It would also give you some chances to bring some of the other elements in as well. Caine does not have a "normal" life, but could interact with the everyday people just to help him understand what the new normal really is. More vaults opening could be used as a quick shift in focus, but also might be less people so they could be easier to escape to "normal" life and help out Caine in the technology bunkers.
Lastly, I like the area (as its where I life). You could have some of the "bluegrass" being rich farm land as the areas between Louisville, Cinci, and Lexington being productive (add horses as well). As the fourth option Eastern Kentucky, WV and the rest of Appalachia might be a good area of "good old boys" who still hunt, fish and just hang up in the mountains Like they always have. Show little impact on their lives as they already were mostly self sufficient anyway.
@Anon Caine History Buff: ask and ye shall receive. I’ve already submitted Part 14 that deals with said family and it should post here any day now. ^.^
in an earlier story you mentioned how caine trained with his family and another set of preppers. hearing about them would be great. maybe survived in a volt but got taken by raiders and caine finds them while saving vaulters.
A - I want more of Caine, dammit!
C - more every day stories mixed in with Caine
D - follow your idea for a sequel your writing is too good to be wasted...please give us more.
C and D. Here some ideas. The pros and cons of unscrupulous immigration.
I want to hear about some phat ass Latina refugees and their ruthless coyotes that raid, trade, and pimp their women. They migrate from what used to be Central America to Maysville. Following the Texas coast. Mississippi River and Ohio river. They have a routine caravan route from Tegucigalpa to Pittsburgh. The Lincoln lesbian Caine trained shows up in Maysville on a diplomatic mission with an interpreter to help with cultural exchange. Caine is now a sophisticated statesman. They demand free the women and give them choice the Lincoln Way or have the coyotes face consequences. A message from Caine that he has heard about their activity and is offering them a peaceful way out of sexual slavery.