Miriam sneered with absolute satisfaction on seeing his eyes contort as the top half began its descent into darkness; he groaned into the gag and felt the hot semen spread as his body pinioned in the total ecstasy of utter defeat, the delicious torment of absolute submission flooding his senses as he spent in ecstasy, watching his wife's broad smile while she toyed with the slaves huge cock and enjoyed seeing him slip from view into the darkness below. The grinning maids swiftly slid the slabs back, leaving him to complete his divine orgasm in total darkness, taking pleasure in holding the vibrating rope as he spent the contents of his defeated balls into the luxuriant and cruelly confining rubber.
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'Adjectives'; Yeah, my use of English leaves a lot to be desired...
...I do tend to rush some of my work, downloading it before reading through to pick up on those obvious errors; I don't use an editor. You'll have to forgive my impatience on that front!
Good story, but ease up on the adjectives. Also try mixing in some new ones so you can't read the same one three times on one screen.
Hello again my friend...
....thanks yet again for your invaluable and comprehensive evaluation!
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