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Click here"G'on he's waiting to talk to you." One of the stone faced guards nodded his head towards the door. Connor walked in with his hands up already expecting to be pat down. He wondered why they didn't do it earlier, what if he was carrying when D.J. pulled on him? Or maybe that's what Melendez wanted.
"Don't bother with that shit if he was hot he would have pulled on puto back there." Melendez waved a hand away and pulled the dying cigar from his mouth. "So were you able to knock some since into that nephew of mine?" he asked happier than Connor thought he should be.
He shrugged gauging how he should handle this. "I popped him one, but if it did any good..?" he gave a sardonic grin. Melendez let out a hoot of laughter.
"I like you kid…" Melendez leaned back in his chair respect and admiration this kid was going far.
- COMMENTS
KittyOh48over 11 years agoEveryone has secrets, but does that stop you from finding, falling, and giving love? It is time for Alexa, Connor, Janabelle, and Gauge to find out!
6ftOvergroundover 14 years agoYour storyline has what the majority of what Literotica is missing overall: it's well thought out, has great character development--and above all--it's actually believable.
The only suggestion that I could make is to find an editor. I am a writer myself (and consider myself a damned good one), but I still need an editor to look over my work and catch small mistakes that I don't, such as changes in tense, misspellings, etc.
But by all means, finish this series; I don't get involved in to many of the stories here but this one has grabbed me; don't make us wait for another chapter.
theonlinestalkeralmost 15 years agoI just spent a few hours reading all of your stories. And I absolutely can't wait to read more. More please. You have a way with words. Can't wait for the next chapter.
EroticLitKittyalmost 15 years agoI was literally just thinking about this story about a week ago and I'm so glad you updated. You did not disappoint - it was wonderful and I'm anxiously waiting for the next installment :-)
Kitty
