Ashes of Love

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After his enlistment was up Three returned home. He had met a wonderful young lady while serving. She has the brightest red hair you have ever seen. The first time we met she told a story about an old lady who told her to go to a party one evening. She met Three there.

They walked into the new family room, both shouted out at the same time "That's her, that's the old gypsy lady." as they pointed at the photo on the wall.

From time to time Betsy Marie will speak of something Eve has taught her.

I am restoring the truck I drove when we first met. Missy still refuses to drive MY mustang as she calls it. We take it for a drive on most Sundays.

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ImNotanAnonImNotanAnon2 days ago

Nope, couldn't contort my brain enough to suspend disbelief THAT much.

Jalibar62Jalibar624 months ago

A couple of things:

1. The Navy has Navy Enlisted Classifications (NECs), not MOSs.

2. It bothered me that with her family’s resources, she wasn’t able to find him sooner. She basically stole his son’s entire childhood from him. The Marines found HER, why couldn't she find HIM?

A gypsy told her he’d come back to her eventually, so she stopped looking?? Seriously?

Jalibar62Jalibar624 months ago

Grammar Police Alert: (Not just for this author, this is just the last straw 😊)

DESERT = arid place with little vegetation

DESSERT = Something sweet after dinner

Thank you.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman8 months ago

good story, thanks

Pinto931Pinto93111 months ago

Not a bad story but parts of it were very corny.

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