"Good," Sarah said with a broad smile, and then she chuckled. "Does that mean you're going to be the one to break this to Mom, Lynn and Abby?"
And with that simple comment, Ashley's eyes were as wide as saucers again.
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Take it from me
Take it from me, there are not too many superfluous words in this story. It is a very well-written and heart-warming piece. You can write, so keep at it.
Sorry
Too many superfluous words. Detracts from the story line, whatever it is. I couldn't figure it out. Granted, I'm one half of a set of twins, 19 and blonde. Two stars, one thumb up.
Cruel, Cruel, Oh so Cruel.
Another beautiful chapter, emotional, sexual and so stimulating.
I tingled as I read each paragraph, well written with a great story line, where will it lead too?
Please don't stop writing, you are so talented, you know how to stimulate a girls mind.👄 The electricity you are creating in me is sure to cause an overload to my system.
I am hoping the combination of the high voltage ⚡⚡⚡ ,together with the "flood" I am experiencing doesn't cause me to explode. 🎆more...
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