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"Thanks. I had a lot of trouble sleeping last night. The only thing I could think about was how'd you react this morning." My sister cuddled up with my blanket. There were a few white spots on it, but she didn't seem to care nor notice. "I don't think I'll have any problems sleeping tonight."
From my chair, I watched Ashley close her eyes and enter a peaceful state of bliss. Not another sound came from my bed. I sat there for who knows how long before being overtaken by drowsiness. Turning off the computer monitor and lamp, I crawled beneath my blanket. Ashley was courteous enough to sleep on one of half of the mattress, but I didn't want to end the night with any space between us. Scooting closer to her until our faces lay inches apart, I faintly smelled my scent from her mouth.
The past twenty-four hours had been one hell of a ride and I wondered what the following day would bring me. Ashley has been--and always would be--a big part of my life. Till then, all I had were games and grades. I've had a crush on my sister since we were young teens and I thought my obsession would be nothing more than a what-if. Now that what-if has become a will-be. The possibilities were endless and I couldn't wait.
I soon joined Ashley in dreamland with a serene smile across my face.
- COMMENTS
ScottishTexanabout 2 years agoOkay, I'm not even halfway through this and I'm loving it. If you don’t fuck it up somewhere in the last half of the story, then you're definitely going to get 5 stars out of me. The playful banter between Ashley and her brother feels very lifelike. Case in point, I totally lost it and went ROFLMAO over the following paragraph:
Ashley could barely contain herself. She kept laughing as she spoke. "No way. The things Nicole can do to me are way worse than this." I imagined Ashley strapped down in a Frankenstein-ish castle with a demented Nikky ready to flip a giant switch behind her.
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I absolutely NEVER stop reading in the middle of a story to make a POSITIVE comment. I've stopped many, many times and quit reading to make a negative comment before I walked away. That should be a sign for you. I'm returning back to your tale so that I can continue to enjoy your work. ❤ 🤍 💙 🧡
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoI almost stopped reading this first chapter about half way through because it seemed to be getting boring. And then the family dinner scene and the conversation just simply became "corny" in my opinion. I'm Not a writer and I don't mean to criticize but the conversation just didn't sound like what mature adults would say especially from a Dad. But then the anticipation/action between Ashley and Brian saved it. Erotic without being sleazy. And yeah, Brian's actions and words do seem to be a bit odd for someone who is 2 years older than Ashley. But as the author pointed out, he is shy and inexperienced. They are both learning from each other. Nothing wrong with that. They are in No hurry. I hope the rest of the series is up to par with this one. 5
