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Click hereI am in awe of Larissa; she is able to so comprehensively control any situation, with any audience, at any time.
I contemplate my own immediate future.
Here I stand, my conscience exposed and awaiting to be tried.
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This is my first story.
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Ringle
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoThis is great stuff! Its's just what this world needs a little more of...cum snorting!
Anonymousabout 5 years agoWhat a fucking incredibly erotic story. Oh my fuck, up the nose!! Great idea, I wonder if any women do this on the regular? Looking for more of this type of material.
hottialmost 13 years agoLike you said :) I think it has a lot of potential, though. If you ever do a re-write, you might think of turning it into several chapters, so you can expand on the material you've got here, and that way you'll develop the characters a little more. Also, a category change might suit it. I enjoyed most of it though! Thank you.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoWell, you certainly have a lot of ideas. I think your willful suspension of disbelief went a bit overboard at certain parts. In particular, your whole concept of the law changing this much in 10 years is a bit silly... why not make the story in 2219? Also, the various time shifts (spring break, the library, etc) don't all link up. I like your attention to detail, I just think you could stay a bit more close to reality where no deviation is needed.
