"You have got to be the best team mom...ever!"
She smiled and shook her head. "Just don't go bragging on me to the rest of the team. I don't want them to get jealous." She put her bra and shirt back on and got out of the car as Mike zipped up.
A few minutes later they were driving up the parking attendant's booth and then through the exit. They listened to the radio and not saying much. Neither of them knew where this relationship was going to go from here. Ava suspected that after the season, she probably wouldn't see him again, at least until next spring. At the same time, Mike was trying to calculate his next move to get Ava into bed.
The end.
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This was a great story.
This was a great story. I hope you continue the chapters.
Part 2
Please can we have a part 2
Please give us part 2
Wannaaaa know moreeee
Thank you for the encouragement and criticisms
This is supposed to be a story of reluctance. Ava, even though she is attracted to Mike, is fighting her feelings about having a sexual relationship with him, even though Mike makes that very difficult for her.
I have tried to communicate the reasons for this reluctance in at least three ways; the first being their age difference, the second being Mike's acquaintance with her son, and the third being that even though she is separated, she is still married. Ava is tempted, she isn't a casual slut.
The end of the story is meant to show that she is still having this conflict even though her attempts to just touch and jerk Mike get out of control and turned into a blowjob. However, she now thinks that the relationship is over and that she is satisfied with what has transpired between them. Mike obviously now has his first taste of Ava and wants more.
I might try a continuation, but it would probably take some time to develop. I am currently finishing up on another submission that I am tentatively calling "Reliving the Past", so keep your eyes open for that soon.more...
Good story
Good stuff here love the build up keep up the gold work
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