Avenging Angels Ch. 00-01

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"Can I get you anything Father, coffee, orange juice?" Cali asked as they sat down at the kitchen table. "Coffee would be a god send" Michael replied getting a happy grin from Sam and a wonderful lilting laugh from Cali.

After the coffee was served Michael pulled the package from his robes.

"This was delivered to the archdiocese this morning by Papal messenger, we were to deliver it to you as quickly as possible and place it only into your hands," Michael said as he passed the package over to Sam.

With the package delivered Michael felt a sense of relief, it was a unique experience being in the presence of these two young women.

He lingered over his coffee for a few moments and then, with a small sigh, knew it was time to leave.

Finishing his coffee he stood, as did the women, the urge was suddenly overwhelming and Michael crossed the distance and embraced Cali before either new what was happening, the hug was wonderful, imparting love, acceptance, warmth and community.

Cali thought it was the most wonderful hug a man had ever given her.

He moved to Sam next and her feelings were the same as Cali's 'what an amazing person this is,' she thought.

Michael stood back and looked at the women, "May the lord bless you and keep you safe from all harm" Michael stated with a conviction that surprised all three.

With a small bow and smile Michael left the women standing in wonder each with a hand on the package, the package that would change their lives and their perception of the world forever.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
You write so well

Great story written with finess.

djb

mokkelkemokkelkeabout 13 years ago

i'm weak, couldn't wait, so started reading this tale !

intriguing start to say the least ;-)

TelozTelozover 14 years ago
Please, please, please!

I know it's difficult, but can you please check the "How To" section on Literotica that deals with apostrophies! Better still, buy a book on punctuation and keep it for handy reference. A great story, spoiled for me by inattention to detail, missing out an apostrophe gives a completely different meaning to a word.

ebonygriotebonygriotover 15 years ago
Promises

to be a an intriquing story. The initial paragraphs took me a little while to get into but I'm drawn by the almost underscored hint of something 'mythical/spriritual' about to happen. I'd like to see more backstory and emotional details about the characters being introduced. You've left us with a sense of anticipation as we wait to find out how Sam and Cali are like Yin and Yan. Please continue as I feel you'll be weaving an interesting and engaging tale with this submission.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Intriguing setup

I'm very curious to read more, and see where this all is heading. I like the set up so far. Good job!

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