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Kyal stayed silent as Ehlena cried herself out. His breathing evened out, and Ehlena thought he had fallen asleep. She started drifting off, and, just before losing consciousness, she thought she heard Kyal whisper to her.
"You are not average, Ehlena. You're anything but, breathtaking as a sunset and as fiery as the sun. I can't stand to let you be anything but mine."
Ehlena took one more breath, in, out, and finally reached sleep.
- COMMENTS
CleverTwinover 4 years agoAlthough, I do agree with the previous review about Ehlena being too rigid & a bit rude. But otherwise, I like it. One mistake I noticed was that in the first chapter Ehlena wanted to keep a picture of her parents because they were long dead. But in this chapter her parents are alive.
AspieGirl88about 5 years agoI have to admit, this was quite a good story, with plenty of in-depth descriptions in different scenarios. As a writer myself (though not on Literotica), I can appreciate the amount of research you must have put into this. I like how you described Ehlena's concussion & shoulder dislocation to the letter, as I find it quite interesting & unique to read in this type of story (as not all erotic stories have this much detail). I have to be honest, though ... I thought Ehlena was kind of being an entitled/ungrateful b*tch in that situation. She had been placed in a position where she could literally be gang-banged to death & considered less worthy than a dog's dinner. Then Kyal is there trying to protect her from such a fate & treats her as gently as possible, caring for her while she's sick (something that often chases a lot of guys away), even being enough of a gentleman to refrain from immediately taking advantage & sticking his boner in her! And she moans about a little bit of touching? She's obviously trying to have her cake & eat it, LOL. I think if I were in her place, I would've at least agreed to gentle foreplay at first & then work slowly (& gently) upwards from there. Seems like a reasonable enough offer (plus Kyal sounds really cute & protective, which is always a good combo). Still, maybe Ehlena will come around once she realises he will look after her & won't hurt her... =o)
