Carey wanted more than four episodes. He remembered Hank in the men's room, in the audition. He was in good shape, and more important, he was a good director.
"OK, you talked me into it. So where are you?" Carey answered, knowing what he wanted, and what might help him get it.
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Well captured scenario
A good FAWC entry, you used the song well. You had it taped - those feelings of not being quite sure what's going on, but you realise painfully that it's not about talent.
It was a bit bumpy around the seduction of Carey by Dale. He drifted off into the flashbacks, and then suddenly we were back to be told: "No, we're not doing auditions." The shock of finding that out after putting out came across well, however we never quite got into the moment of him sucking Dale off.
I felt more could have been done with Carey's ambivalence, his farm boy innocence clashing with his liking for the sex and his ambition. Maybe there's a Part 2 about those feelings.
(That would be 'gay first time' as a tag? cuz there wasn't any fisting ;).)more...
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