- Erotic Couplings
- Awake
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"Hmmm. Tempting," she responded, turning once more onto her back, "will you wash my back?"
"Of course. I'll wash your entire body if you want."
"That would be nice." With an enigmatic smile on her face she continued, "I don't think I'd mind skinny dipping with you now, what do you say we do that first?"
- COMMENTS
BenLong2 months agoAuthorWell, anon - I guess I'm glad this is the latest comment received, not one of the first 10 years ago. Although you're welcome to your opinion, you seem to have missed the point. This story wasn't about the sex, about describing her pussy, ass or breasts. This story was about emotions and the heartache of losing our most precious relation, the love of our life. When our gut is wrenched out and suddenly we wonder if "WE" can go on, over time we find that yes, we can. Surely it will change, but will it go on, and will our life be alone? Will we find another to fill and un-fillable void?
Anonymous2 months agoCharming premise.
But pretty much all back story.
The sex scene is really MEH.
For two people who haven't had sex in a long time -- with anyone -- there needed to be a lot more exploration. More getting-to-know the other's body.
Needed some serious invilvement of her breasts. And her ass. And her pussy.
Needed extensive involvement of mouths -- both ways.
Needed diaog during it to confirm it's what each wanted.
What about birth control?
And you wrote: "...The moon, just beginning to peak over the hill,..." You meant PEEK, not PEAK
Three stars.
Anonymous12 months agoExcellent story. I am sure there are many people in a situation like Janet and Rob. Hopefully they have an understanding and agreeable neighbor like Jim to develop that kind of relationship.
