She felt the hard, latex-covered cock head press against the fingers holding her lips apart and she felt it move up and down, spreading her plentiful juices. When the head returned to nestle between her fingers again, Cleo whispered "Right there! Give it to me right there."
She got what she wanted. The thick head wedged between her fingers and into the wet pink hole beyond. A brief burst of pain shot through her body from the sudden unaccustomed stretching but it was immediately replaced by a greater feel of joy and an all-encompassing sense of well-being, as if she were in the perfect place at the perfect time.
Aaron saw the brief grimace on her face and halted his penetration. "Did that hurt?" he asked her.
"No. No, not at all. It feels really wonderful. Please don't stop."
Still holding his cock in one hand to guide it, he continued. With Aaron's next stroke, almost an inch of his hard shaft plowed its way into Cleo's pussy. She sighed in bliss and nestled her head more deeply into the pillow, savoring the intense pleasure of Aaron's hard dick stuffing her pussy. After his next firm push, he no longer needed to guide his cock so he leaned closer and placed his right hand beside Cleo's smiling face.
While his cock burrowed in more deeply, she felt it surging into her and raised her legs, wrapped them around Aaron's thighs and thrust back to meet him. The greatest rolling wave of bliss swept through her body and Cleo moaned in pleasure. Most of the thick shaft was imbedded in her pussy and she raised her arms in invitation. He responded by sliding his hands under her shoulders and lowering himself until their faces were close enough for them to share a long, soulful kiss. She could taste her juices around his mouth but Cleo was too enamored to care about that.
The next stroke was just as good, as were the one after that and the many that followed. Wave after wave of immense pleasure swept through Cleo's body and she could feel her climax mounting. Her orgasm from having her pussy eaten had been the most fantastic sexual experience in her life but the next one she would achieve promised to be even better.
Besides the way she her pussy was responding to Aaron's long, deep strokes, her body was rocking from side to side and her eyes were closed in bliss while her head tossed back and forth on her pillow. As they had before, her hips were swiveling but, instead of her legs thrashing uncontrollably, they kept a tight grip on the man above her, jerking his body around with her movements.
There was something important Cleo wanted to say to Aaron so she briefly forced the movements of her head to cease and placed her lips as close to his ear as she could. "I love you," she whispered.
Aaron was taken aback. Nobody had said that to him in years, especially not his wife. Suddenly, he knew how he felt about Cleo and about what she had just said. "I love you too," he whispered back to her.
After hearing the words she had waited so long to hear, she tightened her legs and hands onto the man who had just said them and nuzzled her lips against his face. Their coupling continued but it seemed to take on new dimension. Cleo felt so much better about finally telling Aaron how she felt about him and her movements became more frantic under the body of her lover.
As he continued plunging his cock jn and out of the tight pussy under him, Aaron came to realize what he had said was the absolute truth; he really did love the sweet and lovely girl who was sharing his bed. That night, for the first time in years, he was making love with a woman, not just having sex with her, as he expected to be doing with Whatever-her-name-is from the office. Rather than being pissed off at her as he had been earlier, he realized she had done him a huge favor.
Aaron and Cleo continued making slow, beautiful love while their climaxes mounted inside their bodies. Her hands were lovingly caressing his back and sides when she whispered in his ear "I'm almost ready to come, Sweetheart."
"Me too. I'll hold back so you can come first."
"Why don't we try to come together?"
"That's even better."
Aaron increased the speed of his strokes and changed the angle slightly so his cock and Cleo's clit would massage each other more fully. She noticed the change and matched his pace while whimpering more loudly in pleasure. A minute later, she whispered that she was ready to come.
He increased the pace again. "Yes! My god," she sang out as her climax started to overwhelm her body. Her fingernails were well-trimmed and Aaron was glad of that because her hands stopped stroking his back and dug into the muscles. The movements of Cleo's legs became even more strenuous and she jerked her lover all over the bed for as long as she was coming.
Aaron's climax had been ready to explode and his lover's coming was enough to force the eruption, he gave a soft grunt and a burst of his cum shot out into his condom. He didn't stop with the one spurt but continued driving his cock into the extremely active pussy under him.
When her orgasm inundated her with a tsunami of joy, Cleo cried out loudly and ecstatically as all her muscles clenched and her back arched, driving her pussy against the man who had brought about that glorious event. Within seconds of her climax, Aaron ejaculated into his condom for the third and final time and was through coming. After their fabulous simultaneous climaxes, Aaron and Cleo lay in a tired and happy pile, kissing and whispering how great their first love-making had been.
"That was just perfect," she said. I've never felt anything like it."
"I'm glad you liked it. It was pretty terrific for me too."
When his cock softened and slipped out of Cleo's pussy, he got off her and they lay face to face, still marveling about what a fabulous time they had enjoyed together. Finally, she interrupted their reverie on a less than happy note.
"I suppose I'd better get dressed and go home." However, she made no move to do so and continued lying with her naked body pressed against Aaron's equally unclothed form.
"What for?" he asked. "Why don't you stay here tonight and we can do the same thing in the morning?"
That settled it for Cleo. She snuggled even closer to Aaron and kissed him, before turning her back so they could cuddle in the spoon position with his hands cupping her breasts. They fell asleep like that with beautiful thoughts and dreams of what the next day and many more after that would hold for them.
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I really enjoyed the amount of editting that was clearly involved in this piece. I find that most stories here are hastily written and not at all editted. The grammar and spelling is off, and no one ever uses more advanced descriptions or verbs. I didn't notice the switching of hair color, so I guess I'll have to reread. I also think the comment about character development is a big harsh. This is a short story, not a novel. There were two things that really stuck out to me about this story: 1) it wasn't some sultry girl trying to seduce a helpless man, and 2) this dad was single and believably and understandably irritated with his lack of sex life. These alone ,in my opinion, set your babysitter/dad story apart immediately. I loved this story, and I will definitely be reading more of your stories.more...
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While a tolerable little story, this is not a Romance. It would be better categorized as Erotic Couplings...
VisualPerv
Interesting little stroke story involving babysitter fantasies
I like how, it was MORE her fantasy than his, that led to the coupling. The timeline did seem a little off, concerning the length of his first marriage. 4 year old kid, but he was only 25? How long WAS he married? Did you say how long he had been divorced? I admit I may have missed it, if you did. OK, maybe those details didn't matter so much, but the timeline seemed hastily constructed, at best. Attention to detail, (as others commented) in the background helps to solidify character development. You can't be in such a rush to get to the sex scene that you haven't given us a chance to get to know your characters, and just what it was that brought them to this place in time. The idea, that one night of passion can so quickly turn into love (you know, vs. just getting laid), is more believable after first establishing the characters motivations. Here you seem to have "tried", but like other stories you have that I have read, strong character development continues to be your weakness.
I suggest doing an outline where you list specific things, beliefs, motivations, physical and personality descriptions of each character. Set it aside, and write in whatever way your process dictates. But in your editing stage, refer back to your outline, and see if what you have written has truly allowed these "people" to come alive, as you originally intended. This ALSO serves as the time to double check on continuity errors. I know some authors will state that coming up with backstories for their characters is even more fun then manipulating them through the plot. It is the characters that truly make a story unique and original.
Divorced Dad Fucks Babysitter!
It might not be headline news, but it IS a common theme that MANY people have done before. What makes it YOUR story, is SHOWING us who these people are. What kind of a girl lusts after her older boss? What kind of girl is still babysitting at 20? What are her plans for the future? Who is he? Why is he looking everywhere BESIDES at her, who is right under his nose? Writing about the great sex they ultimately have IS an important part of the story for these two, however, it is only just a few hours out of a long complicated life. The other details should never take a back seat in your story-telling IF you hope to get to that next level of success with your writing.
One other side note, SPA, I wrote a pretty long comment on your "slut" essay, and I was wondering if you had any response? Seeing you respond in comments here, made me wonder why you didn't respond to the comments over there? I was getting ready to send you a PM, since I am anon on this site. As long as my comment was, as I have reread it, I find I have more to say, or more I wish I had put in. But anons only get one chance to comment on any given story.... Oh well. If I sent you an email, would you respond to that?
Even so, good luck, and I hope to read and watch your writing steadily improve. The more you write, the better and (I dare say) the easier it gets. Thanks!more...
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I think that's a good idea and I will do it. The sequel will be very short and will put down Rachel.
Rachel
I wanted something about the next time he went into the office and thanked Rachel for the date, since it led to him finding love. I'm sure she thought she could string him along for a while.
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