Babydoll Ch. 02

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"Please," I said, astonished at her quick change of heart. Her soft hand tentatively grabbed ahold of my buddy and squeezed him a few times."

"I wanna help you get off, but we can't be you know... ok?"

"I know," I confirmed sheepishly

"You know Jimmy, it was all good the last time until you stuck it in me." She told me with newfound confidence.

I almost started to cry as I told her, "And I am so sorry about that. I was just out of control."

"I understand that now, but you have to stay in control if we're gonna mess around. I am your woman and you are my man, but you can't take advantage. I could get pregnant and that would ruin everything," she admonished me.

"So if you swear not to screw me over again I'll let you get off. Now lay back down here," funny how she was directing traffic now

We were still naked and I laid down behind her with my Louisville slugger. " Ok Ash. Let me do this right." I whispered in her ear.

I reached over into my nightstand and grabbed my baby oil and squirted some at the top of her ass. And rubbed it in as she started to sigh. Then I lathered up my rod and moved it over to her sweet ass and started sliding it.

I slid my arms around her and fully embraced her grabbing hold of those wonderful Ta-Tas. I began gaining a wonderful rhythm grinding my cock in between her tight ass cheeks.

"Ha ha ha ha. Come on baby, Rock it for me," As she obliged, "Oh God you're beautiful. Oh, I love it."

Then I rolled her over completely on her stomach so that I could get better leverage. I picked up the baby oil and squirted some more on her back and started massaging and slathering it into her back. I placed my cock back in between her magnificent cheeks and resumed my rhythm with both arms to her side. Ash seemed to be getting into this as much as I was. She was erotically rocking back and forth. "Oh Jimmy, Oh, Oh, Oh."

I grabbed the bottle of oil and squirted some more on her back. Lowering myself into her, I started slathering my chest into her back -- the friction of the oil making the sensations almost unbearable, I whispered in her ear, "Oh, Yeah, OH, Yeah. I'm gonna come, Baby. I'm Gonna come for you."

I pulled her sides up to the doggy position and placed my thumb on my glans as I pounded into her backside. Then I began to boil. I pulled her up to me as I continued the rhythm. Sucking on the nape of her neck. "Oh, Oh, Oh Ah, ah, Ah," as jet after jet started to spew between us. "Unnnggghhh, oh, oh, oh., Shit."

I collapsed and pulled her down beside me, furiously rolling my tongue with hers. "That was so great Ash. I love you, Oh God, I love ya, Baby."

Smiling at me, " I love you to Jimmy. I love you so much."

We cuddled front to front for a while, nuzzling and kissing some more. I was starting to get excited again, but I wasn't going to get carried away.

Looking at the clock it was now 3:30. The smell of sex was in the room. There was cum everywhere. We were going to have to clean up the mess before anyone got home.

I looked at Ash, "Let's get cleaned up and go back out to the pool."

She laughed, "You afraid we're gonna get caught."

Chuckling back, "Only if you want to."

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OldUncleAlOldUncleAlover 2 years ago

Story is progressing well! He is learning That restraint and patience can open many doors.

Hey, they are both naked, he gets to munch on her and then she gets him off…just enjoy it for a while, especially since it sounds like her body is still maturing.

mrsugarlovermrsugarloverover 6 years ago
Damn that was hot!

The first chapter was hotter, but this was just as hot... you've got me looking forward to the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

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She didn't want to fuck and I wasn't ever going to force her to again. When we did it was going to be right and it would be her decision – or at least she would think it was.

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...once a rapist, always a rapist, lol. :/

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Then I placed my hands on her side and drug her to the edge of the bed. Getting down on the floor I had better access and control of her love.

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...and you dont wind up with a neck-ache for the next three days!

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That feels great, Jimmy. Uuuummm, Oh oh, Uh Yeah., Oh yeah, Ummmm, Ummmm, Ohhhhh." That was all the encouragement I needed and I was eager to take it further. She was really turned on.

"That's it," she hissed. "Do it, Do it, Oh God," she laid back down off of her elbows.

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Man, I wish my wife was vocal like that! I dont hear shit out of her till her orgasm and even then its not a lot, lol.

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I almost started to cry as I told her, "And I am so sorry about that. I was just out of control."

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Man, he's still feeding her that line of bullshit? Daaaamn. (Rolling eyes) ...think he needs to hit some rapers anonymous meetings, hehe.

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I grabbed the bottle of oil and squirted some more on her back.

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(Mom) ...son, why are your sheets all oily and greasy?

...I think someone commented that the brother is a douche, ...well Yeah! Huge ass douche, lol. He might love his sister but he's not IN love with her, he's just a scheming scabber trying to get his dick back in his sister without her screaming rape! Lol. She's worth waiting for to him because hey, when she comes around having the girl that you're fucking living with you is awfully handy! Lolz.

...mind you, I'm still enjoying reading the story somewhat, it does need work, but you have to keep writing and improving to get there!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I tried

Maybe I just couldn't get into the character, but he just seems like a douche to me. He thinks he loves his sister, but all he's doing is scheming a way to bang her. Your writing was worse in this chapter than the last as well. Keep practicing before posting. I stopped reading when I read the line "The even better part..."

I will never say to give up writing, because you're not the worst I've read on Lit, but I do suggest taking a writing class or something. The more you write, the better you'll get. Also, read more before you write more. Try to find your "voice."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Loved all parts so far

I absolutely disagree with the comment that said you should delete Part One and start from here.

I really loved part one. It was tremendously exciting to have that loving rape. It was perfect.

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