Babydoll Ch. 10

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"Yes, baby, yes." she moaned back as her chin rested on my shoulder. The velvet love plumbed every drop of my fleshy pipe until no more came forth. I felt a connection with her that I never knew was possible. She had satisfied my masculine need.

I continued nuzzling and flicking her earlobe as my once hard mast began to retreat from the seeping loveliness. My mother's chin rested against my shoulder as I felt her rested from her accomplishment. She sadly propositioned, "Hello Ashley. Did you enjoy the show?"

I looked up to see a tear in roll from my mother's eye to her cheek. I quickly turned from my mother's bewildered stare to observe the torrid anger in Ashley's eyes as she stood in the doorway. Then she turned and ran from the room.

Something inside me let me know that I had been setup. My mother had accomplished her mission. I screamed, "What the fuck? You used me. You fucking used me." I yelled as I jumped from the bed and wrapped a sheet around my naked waist.

My mother confirmed my deepest, darkest notion, "I am protecting both of you," my exposed and vulnerable mother whaled. "It had to be stopped. It had to be put to an end."

"She is going to hate me. She is going to hate you. I love her, I would never hurt her." I cried.

My mother had a look of someone who had their grandest plans blow up in their face. As she ran to me, to comfort me, she whaled, "It will all be alright. It will take time. But now, you two can move on."

What was I going to do? I had to pack my shit and get out of there. Oh my god, I had screwed up so bad. How could I ever get passed this all consuming guilt? My wants had consumed my needs.

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The FantasizerThe Fantasizeralmost 6 years agoAuthor
19 years old

This isn't a boy/man that has fully matured. This is a young person feeling his way through the world. He's 19 and he hasn't experienced much sex. Yeah, his mother is flawed too. Actually, his mother is a lot like him and that is to be expected in a lot of ways, because she is his mother. The mother is justifying it to protect her children, at the same time her mind is bent by the fact that Jimmy reminds her so much of the love she has lost. This is meant to be a deep story. That is the reason it took so long to write. This isn't a wham bammer…

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I knew it!!!

What the fuck man?!?! The girl you claim that you love and can't live without just got her sweet innocent and very delicate heart ripped from her chest. Mother is a bitch and you're a son of a bitch!! Pack your crap and leave. Instead of being a man and telling your mom no because you are in love with your baby sister you decide to be a mother fucker ( pun intended) and break the heart of the women who trusted you and gave herself fully to you!!! Jimmy you need to disappear and never come back. Ash would have probably switched schools to be with you. She might have even been the mother of you children one day since the story never says she was on the pill yet!!! Way to fuck up and let mother control everything mommas boy!! I hope your sister never gives you another chance in hell to be anything more than a brother. In fact you don't even deserve that!!

mrsugarlovermrsugarloverover 6 years ago
What a tale...

Hot story, but Babydoll and Jim belong together. I looked at some of the other comments before posting this and some are pretty harsh, but I like how involved this story is. It is deep and intriguing. The early chapters were pretty simple, but now the story has taken a huge complex turn... and it is making me more and more interested to see how it all turns out. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
-2,000,000

negative two million for the crappy end to what was a decent story you should be ashamed of yourself. delete and rewrite doing it right this time and be sure to finish it properly NO MORE CLIFF HANGERS.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wrong ending

This is the wrong way to end a story. I feel like this was a waste of my time. I read all 10 chapters and it didn' work out for mother or daughter or for the son. Now that I know how you end stories you will never get more than 2 stars, EVER.

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