"No problems," said Carl. "I slept fine where I was."
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"No problems," said Carl. "I slept fine where I was."
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Glad to see you back
I haven't read a new story of yours in a while. You do good work, and I wish you would write longer pieces. God knows you have the talent for it. But if I ever need a quickie read, there you are! I think my favorite part was the ripping the t shirt. Not much is sexier than a man ripping off your garments, without warning you. I don't even need the sex following it to be at the precipice. But rough and ready sex is always welcome. Well done!more...
Good story!
I liked these characters a lot! Part 2 perhaps? ;)
Good erotic read
Thought it should have been in mature, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your detail as always fantastic.... Keep up the get me wet writing...
To all the anon commenters::
This story is in the right category, if your going to leave comments about rape etc than when you realised that you should have left the page and go into another story that is less R18+. This site is for Pornographic Stories audio and visual if you don't like the category don't read it. Or maybe you do and it made you get off on the idea of it?? Either way my point is if you don't like it, don't read it.
I liked this story. I've been raped and guess what...simple as that
Nightowl19 (I think I can't log on)more...
Interesting girl...
...dumb story.
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