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Jed couldn't hold out much longer and he grimaced and groaned as his balls grew tight! "Ima Cum in ya too, Britnee!!!"
Britnee tugged his face from between her heaving tits and slapped him hard! "Ain't no fuckin' way in Hell you gonna put a baby in my belly, ya fuckin' idiot!"
Leaping right off his huge prick, she twisted around and pressed her fat tits around Jed's pulsing cock! The feeling of soft tit-flesh on his prick was too much and the young moron cried out as his cock began spitting out sticky loads of cum, painting Britnee's face and chin! In seconds, her heavy juggs were soaked with his jizz and she moaned as the throbbing cock filled her mouth!
The insatiable nympho gulped as much down as she could before throating Jed down to his balls, grunting as the hot slime pumped down her throat. Pulling up, she sucked his fuckstick clean and turned to Jayden's dripping cock, which she also throated and sucked clean!
"Mmmm... I love the way my ass and pussy taste on a couple of jizz covered horse cocks!" Britnee giggled, smearing the cum on her tits all over her belly and face. "You idiots don't look like much, but Lord! Y'all can fuck! Now, go get dressed so we can get outta here! We got bidnizz to take care of."
The twin studs just sat there, stunned by the greatest sex either of them had ever had. Shaking her head, Britnee slapped them back to reality.
"Hey! Dumbfucks! I said git dressed! An' find my clothes while I freshen up!"
Shortly, the trio climbed into Jed's rusted, beat up truck and headed into town.
End Part One
- COMMENTS
gfunk45over 6 years agoAuthorNo, that's my own stupidity. I need to pay closer attention to the details before submitting. Thanks for pointing these out! I'm glad you like the stories so far. Please keep reading and commenting.
electronpoolsover 6 years agoI enjoyed how over the top all of this was. Well-written, too! I found the typos between Britnee and Brandee’s names to be really jarring, though. “Wait, her mother is present and sucking that guy’s cock?! Oh, wait, no. Typo.” Unfortunately, this happens several times. I just started chapter 2 and this happens within the first few paragraphs there, too. I’m really curious as to how that’s occurring—did the characters switch names at some point? Or do you have their names hot-keyed? Anyway, otherwise, quite fun, and props on the fun and unique atmosphere!
Anonymousover 6 years agoI admit I didn't read much of this story, since it's really not to my taste, but if you want a critique I can do that.
"you fuckin' Inbred Morons!" Stop randomly capitalizing words. Capitals are only to start a sentence, or for proper names or places. "Cum" is not any of those.
Numbers under 100 need to be written, e.g. " 5 feet tall" should be "five feet tall."
"Get it, cousin!" he shouted(PERIOD) "(Capital T)ear that slut a new hole!"
You can research the basics of writing in proper English by Googling. I suggest you do so.
If your only aim is to write hard core stroke stories and you don't care how bad your grammar and punctuation are, just ignore all the above.
Finding out that most "authors" here cannot write beyond a fourth-grade level is very disappointing and disturbing.
