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Click hereSaying that, he kicked his friend in the stomach one more time. Najibi tried to intervene to defend her son but she got slapped hard by the man of the house and sat on the floor crying while his baby making cum was still oozing from her pussy lips.
"What have I done?" began Najibi to think in her head...
- COMMENTS
buzzsawlennyover 1 year agoUtter garbage...so this "alpha male sex God" was able to defeat another man in combat all while in the middle of an orgasm and embedded in the guys mother. Wow...hahahahaha...wow who wrote this a 13 year old? The guy had a metal rob as a weapon but still he got his nose broken and beaten by a guy mid coitus? ....mindless drivel
Anonymousover 6 years agoThis series is written so poorly. It was a little funny how bad it is.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoAlright. One, I applaud you for -trying- but well... This story was hard to read or understand, due to the fact that you're not that fluent with the English language... Also...In that particular setting, Yes. The woman would have been killed. Stoned to death or beaten in the streets. And on top of it all...? It's really really hard to understand most of it, simply due to the layout.
pathetic_cuckover 13 years agoJust so you know, I got about 50 words into this and was turned off entirely. It reads a bit like the bible, introducing some 10 different characters in the first two paragraphs.
Ease off, this is just porno. We don't actually need to know each individual character's family lineage.
digdaddyrichover 13 years agoThe only thing that made the story a little hard to read is the difference between languages.
I take it that English isn't the author's first language, and that's what made the reading a little difficult.
Other than that, the premise of the story is very hot, that of a young stud of a man taking the sexy wife of the older man away from him.
The sex scenes were very erotic and the author does have the ability to write erotica.
Keep on writing and I'll keep reading your work.
Thanks for the story, it was very hot.
