Banished Pt. 15

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I studied him.

"You said Ethan led you here, right? Where'd he run off to?"

"He said something really dangerous was out there. Something that he couldn't let roam free in these woods."

I thought about it for a bit.

It was a fairly straight shot out of these woods, and back to the road.

We could most likely make it even if Ethan was engaged with... whatever it was.

But I'd hardly given the matter proper consideration when the door behind us slid open, and a battered looking Ethan stumbled in.

"Close it," he breathed, his voice uneven and slightly panicked, and I stared at him in shock as he slumped to the floor in a heap.

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 Anonymous22 days ago

First we find out that he's a real badass. Then Ethan stumbled in ... battered and panicked ...

Good writing.

Glad to hear you are a "overcomer"

Son_of_BattlesSon_of_Battles6 months ago

Just when you think things are going to settle down, Kousakacomplex turns that bitch up to 11! This is so fucking good! What a fucking storyteller! I can’t even remember if there was sex in this chapter. I was so glued to the story!

 Anonymous7 months ago
Really Great

Chapter seems like the author knows where he is "leading" us and we just get a chance to follow and speculate, with a nice little suspense at then end. Overall great work. 5/5

 Anonymous8 months ago
So good

Part of me screams `write faster, you dolt` wilst I otherwise know I shouldn't rush an artist

KousakacomplexKousakacomplex8 months agoAuthor

@Anon. Yes, it's already been submitted to lit, so most likely will be up before the weekend. Apologies for the delay, though. I had some illness/covid related setbacks that kept me away from my writing station. 😅

To those who sent private feedback, my responses from the last two weeks are also going to be a little delayed. Rest assured though, I'll respond to everyone as soon as things settle down.

Kousaka~

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