"Regina."
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I know, terrible place to end it. the good news is, Chapter 5 is ready to go and I promise to submit it the night after this one so you shouldn't have long to wait. And for those of you who might be thinking 'hey this story is similar to Rebecca!', well you are correct! However the resemblance is intentional, declared in the opening of the story, and I am fully aware of it. Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed this installment. :)
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fucking awesome!!!
5 stars for all your installments. On to chapter 5!!! Although,
, it has been 4 chapters and everytime things get steamy, you always hold back. so frustrating. Hahahahaha. im hoping theyre gonna finally fuck soon. So excited for this. Keep up the good work!more...
oh that is cruel
That botch had the never to come back.... and you know just when I was like,......long story short... make sure she actually dies this time.... :) all good intentions
Ahhh!
I knew it! When he said he couldn't find the body, I KNEW she was still alive! This is such a fun story! Thanks for the updates!
Adding just a pinch of Bronte!
The big reveal of Regina prior to their marriage echoes "Jane Eyre" from my perspective. Rebecca + Beauty and the Beast (possibly + Jane Eyre) = a very novel idea! (I'm still debating whether such a dreadful pun ought to be intentional.)
Any story based on well-known sources will always be compared, usually poorly, with the originals. Nonetheless, your concept is intriguing, neither your grammar nor spelling is dreadful, your vocabulary is not repetitive, and your writing isn't in the least inane. (These faults being the most common problems on sites such as this.)
And so I say, "Bravo!" and I look forward to more.more...
OMG!! She's back from the dead!!
Thank God, Beauty told Adam to wait.
If they had done the deed minutes ago, it will be her turn to go jump in the river after the return of Regina- the mistress of the house and his lawful wife.
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