Owen got up clumsily and started to walk back to the group. Calling; "See you at eight." over his shoulder.
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Can't wait for more!
I read this the first night it was posted and was hooked. I've come back several times to see if the next chapter was up. Please continue this story! I love your writing and characters.
Excellent beginning....more please!
Excellent beginning more soon please?
This is such a good beginning! Definitely my new favorite story post more soon!
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