Delia orgasmed three times while her husband licked her and her Master ignored her. She stayed on the table gasping for breath while her husband's tongue assaulted her sex and her asshole. It wasn't until they were done eating, that her husband stopped, and it was only because he was told to clean up breakfast.
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I like that they're total slaves and animals now. I'd have no problem being part of this lifestyle.
Thank You - Keep Going
JerseyGirl, Thank you for continuing with this series. I love your deliciously dirty imagination. I am looking forward to seeing what becomes of Carl and DiDi.
Ignore the anonymous critics that aren't brave enough to put their money where their mouth is and actually identify themselves. They would rather be a troll, throwing personal insults around like confetti.
It's a good story, not to everybody's taste, but so what! Keep writing.more...
This anon is well known
Posts in several categories, recognizable by style, characteristic phrases, etc. Often the comments show he or she did not read the story. My suggestion is to ignore or delete.
And keep writing. You're doing fine.more...
To Anon:
I am unsure if you are the same anonymous who has posted before, but your "repetitive drivel" comment leads me to believe you are. While I fully welcome constructive criticism, I do not appreciate insults. Your opinion is yours and its valid. Perhaps this story is not for you. I do wonder, if you find my characters so flat, unlikable, and find no draw for you as a reader, how did you make it to the fifth installment. Personally, if I am not drawn in, I stop reading. You may not appreciate this story, and that is fine, but I continue it not only for myself, but also for the people who write me daily asking for more.
So please, come off anon, I would love to critique your work since you have been so kind to leave your opinions of mine.
~Kmore...
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