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Click here"How you doing?" she asked. The domineering tone had completely left her voice.
"I'm cold, and I need to pee."
"So pee then," she said.
"I thought I needed your permission to get up," I said.
"You do, but you don't need it to pee."
"You mean I should just do it right here," I asked.
"That's exactly what I mean," she said.
"I can hold it then," I said.
"You'll be holding it a long time. We're not going in until you've done it." I looked at her and saw that she wasn't joking. Oh, what the hell. I let go and sighed with relief. Plus, my feet were so cold that the warm liquid splashing against them actually felt good. As long I didn't think about what it was.
"Are you finished?" she asked, and I nodded. "Okay, let's go. Your bath is waiting."
As I entered the house, Shoji said to me in a friendly tone, "Really good work. You sure you've never done this before?"
"No, never," I said. "Was I really that good?" That I was happy about this shows what a kid I still was. Any praise is good.
"Yeah, really," he said, and went back to fiddling around with his gear.
"A natural," Reiko said, putting a robe around my shoulders, and guiding me to the bath. A natural? I couldn't decide if that was good or bad, but I knew I was going to see this through to the end.
To be continued . . .
This is a good start to the story. I hope we'll see more of it soon. The charaters are very nicely developed and your dialog is excellent as well.