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*Whew! That's the end of Chapter 5. Hope you guys enjoyed it. Leave feedback, comments, hell even email me with your concerns about the future for Bee and David. I absolutely love talking to you guys. Til then, one love ~CoCo*
- COMMENTS
Anonymous10 months agoYou have managed to bring out a truly wonderful story line. But once again, you're proof reader, if you have one is letting you down! Silly spelling mistakes as well as grammar mishaps, is spoiling the overall nuance of the story!
However, it does not detract from the great story line. And, this is a story that can run and run! Ad infinitum! So don't end this great story, before you show the two main characters enjoying their lives together. Please.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI have been waiting a very long time for the rest of this story. It has a good story line and I can't wait to see who else wants Bianca. It seems like every guy wants her. I hope she continues to open up to David because he really cares about her. I am so ready to know what is happening. Five stars
Anonymousover 9 years agoI keep checking back on this story hoping for an update. Please finish this story for your readers.
