Best Birthday Ever

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She collapsed, and I fell back, falling out of her, collapsing myself. I watched my cum ooze out of her pussy as she drifted asleep on Ashley's back.

I didn't know what to think. So I decided not to think and just pass out.

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by kaydeelicious02/08/15

I still came.

Regardless of the details, or maybe because of certain details, I came and really hard. I like your work, keep writing please.

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by Anonymous01/24/15

Crap at its best!

Where shall I start?
Nope just leave it!!!!! Not worth the time!!!

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by Bambi_Doe01/24/15

What 21 yr old still goes to a school that requires them to wear a uniform??? Plus ewww he didn't even wash his cock after fucking Ashley's ass then he fucks his sister's pussy after.

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by Anonymous01/23/15

What is his sister doing in a Catholic School, with uniforms, at age 21?

Lots of really annoying, distracting little errors that a proper proofreader would have caught. 1*

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by Anonymous01/23/15

um . . .

so, first the black girls name was karen, then it magically changed to Ashley. and also the brother made fun of his sister for living at home when she was 21 and then less that 2 sentences later it saidmore...

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