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Click hereEyes wide open, Cindy rose on her elbow and exclaimed, "Didn't I already just do that, Dan?" and then she glanced down and noticed the ring on her finger. "Yes!!!!" she shouted, as she threw her arms around Dan and squeezed all the air out of him. Tears of joy flowed from both sets of eyes.
I agree with so many of the other commentators.
I managed to read the first and last page. Nobody talks like that.
And womb? Ugh !
I loved it. The story was very descriptive. Eventhough we don't go through the methods that Dan and Cindy did to define and show love doesn't mean the story was bad. We could use some of their methods instead of rushing into the sack then get heart broken in the end.
....the wording felt stiff. It felt like something out of 19th century England.