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"Doesn't feel like that right now."
"Well, come back here tonight around eight and we'll see how it feels then." Bethanie shot Maddy a wicked grin of her own, then hobbled out of the kitchen, looking down to check that she wasn't dripping chocolate sauce as she went.
Maddy sat back and relaxed with a deeply contented sigh. She brought her fingers to her lips and there, under the sickly sweet aroma of all that sugar, was the come of the girl she loved. God, her life was great, and though she had lost the bet - she had lost to Bethanie. Bethy could be a good dom sometimes, and she could tease really well, but she couldn't come up with the more hardcore humiliations that Maddy could.
Could she?
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoBethy and Maddie are brilliant and endearing; what a great duo! Smoldering, sexy and funny, I really enjoy reading about their "adventures." I do hope you decide to write more about them as I do so enjoy reading them.
And... I REALLY hope Bethy gets her revenge against Maddie ;3 That little blonde needs taking down a peg or two.
Totally brilliant!
redkryptoniteover 14 years agoIve followed bethy and maddie since lipstick test.. Theyre just the cutest and horniest couple Ive ever read. I hope the next chapter is coming out soon.
By the way, I really appreciate you putting some romance in there I actually go back to this story just to read that part.
warm_wet_locationover 14 years agoBut you know it already. Your stories are both graphic and lovely...not everyone can pull that off.
What I want to know is why someone who can't even spell "creepy" is critiquing (??I'm being generous)your story. I read somewhere on this site a good guide to haters..pretty funny stuff. When I find it I will send you the link.
